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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 14, 2006 9:28:40 GMT 2
No one knew Terra actually had a family. A home & a regular life. But everything isn't a bed of roses. They lived in Hawaii at the time of her just becoming 14 years old. Her mother was scared of her. Her father (In her point of view) hatted her. Terra's mother didn't want to have anymore children. She was afraid they may inherit Terra's *special abilities*. So yes, she was the only child. Terra had a last name. *Promise*. Yes Terra was a promise for the titans. But in her world in the past she was nothing but a mistake. Like every hero there is a past tradgedy that triggers them to enable a life of making villians suffer , so that the innocent wouldn't suffer the same fate. Terra's case was anything but that. It was the exact oppisite. So try taking minute & walking in someone elses shoes be fore you judge. This is Terra's Past.....
Robin- What did we do to make you hate us so much ? Terra- You were born ! I'm not some sad little girl waitting to be rescued ! I wanted it this way ! (Way : Echoes until can't hear no more.)
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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 14, 2006 10:06:28 GMT 2
Chapter:1
(Linkin Park: Numb)
A young girl with long blond hair walks down an empty halway after school hours. Her mother probably forgot to pick her up again. Or just didn't want to. Hugging her books she cautiously walks down the empy hallway. Bullies have been bothering ever since they found out about her powers. Which was a mistake.
Bully 1: Hey Terra ! I can see your under wear ! Terra- (To herself) Just keep walking ignore them.
The bullies gathered around her ! Stopping her way to escape.
Bully 2: You're not getting away that easily. Terra- Leave me alone ! Bully 3: I think she's gonna cry. Bully 1 : Come on Terra ! We know what you can do. And frankly this school doesn't allow weridos like you ! Terra- Shut up ! Leave me alone !
Suddenly the concrete began to crumble. The bullies were now getting freaked out. The side walk started to break apart from in the middle of it !
Girl- Terra ! No !!
Terra stops ! And falls down crying ! The bullies run off. Assuming to go & tell someone.
Girl- It's ok Terra. I'm here.
Terra just cried as Venessa Clark ( Terra's one & only friend at the moment) held her. A few hours later... Terra sat in the principal's office when her mother came in.
Terra- Mom before you say anything.... Mother- I don't want to hear it Terra.
The principal came back in.
Principal: Mrs. Promise I'd like to speak to you privately please. Diana- Yeah.
Diana & the principal walked the scholl's play ground.
Principal: I wanted to discuss the situation with your daughter's ablilities. Diana- You mean curse. We know about it. Principal- Actually that's not it. Mrs. Promise we can't afford anymore repairs. I'm sorry but your daughter can't remain here. You understand ? Diana- More than you know.
Venessa- Terra what's going on ?
She caught up with Terra and her mother as they were about to walk out the front door.
Terra- I'm not coming back. Diana- Let's go Terra.
They exitted the school before Venessa could tell her friend good bye. She just stood there in the hallway .
Diana was driving her daughter home.
Diana- Everytime Terra. When is this going to stop ? Terra- Mom I didn't mean to. These bullies wouldn't leave me alone...I lost controll. Diana- Same story every time. You always lose control. When will you just learn to ignore bullies ? Terra- Mom it's not that easy. Diana- I know. I've already heard it. This is the third school you've been kicked out of this year. Terra- So home school me ! Diana- We can't afford it. Your father's not going to be happy about this. He will be home tonight. Terra- When is he ever happy around me ?
Diana looked at her sharply.
Diana- Just be quiet til we get home please.
Terra teurned her face to her window hidding her tears. She was good at that now. It has become a regular hobby for her now.
Will- What's she done now ? Diana- Don't worry about it Will. Will- Oh we are going to worry about now. She destroyed something else didn't she ? Terra- Don't talk about me like I'm not here ! Will- That attidues got a big deal to do with it young lady. Terra- Daddy I didn't mean to. Will- I'm sorry Terra. My minds made up. Terra- What're you talking about ? Diana- Will don't not now. Will- She's gotta know sooner or later. We're going to send you to France. To a barding school. Terra- WHAT ?! NO! You can't ! I knew it !! Just admitt it Dad ! You hate me ! You wish I was never born ! She ran up the stairs crying.
Diana- Let her go Will....You do hate her don't you ?
He didn't answer her...
Chapter 2 coming soon everybody !!
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Post by Terra137Raven on Oct 14, 2006 20:53:47 GMT 2
oooooo! cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nice job, i like it!! *waits for next chapter!*
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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 15, 2006 0:21:36 GMT 2
chapter 2 comes to night !!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 15, 2006 10:53:36 GMT 2
Chapter : 2
Terra slammed her bedroom door. It was a pretty cool room though. Despite of all she's been through lately this room has become her santurary. She had earthly designs painted everywhere. The cieling was covered with the moon, stars & planets. Her room said everything she was. All though she had no idea at the moment. As she grabs her head with her palms she reaches over & turns on her cd player.
(From The Inside-Linkin Park)
She just sat on the floor rocking back & forth. Her life at this moment has endded. For what her father was about to do. Until something hit her bedroom window.. She walks over & looks out to see Venessa.
Venessa- Hey ! Terr. Terra- Hey Nessa. Venessa- Can I come in ? Terra- Yeah.
Venessa climbed the drain pipe & entered her room through the window.
Venessa- You left so quickly today. I didn't get a chance to find out what is going on. Terra- He's gonna send me to boarding school....in France. Venessa- What makes him think that'll help ? Terra- So I won't be around him. I don't know. Nessa...I don't want to go. Venessa- I know. It'll be ok though.
She hugged Terra.
Venessa- I'm gonna miss you. Terra- I'll miss you too.
Next Friday...
Diana- Terra come on ! You're gonna miss your flight !
She called for her daughter from the foot of the stairs.
Terra- This really sucks. Diana- Don't say that word. Get in the car.
Heavy traffic was held up for miles. Because of the storm.
Diana- Boy it's really coming down. Maybe this change'll be good for you. Terra- (smart) Or good for you maybe. Diana- Terra. I really don't want to fight. I'm driving. Terra- That's all we seem to do anyway. Diana- I'm trying to reason with you honey. Terra- "Honey" ? Strain your voice mom ? Why ? Because I'm going away ? Face it mom. You're scared of me that's all. I'm scared of myself ! And dad hates me !
The ground beneath us began to shake like an earth quake was about to start. The street began to split up !! People in their cars were panicing & wondering what was going on ! Out of nowhere a huge boulder came & headed for the Promises car !
Diana- AAHHH!!!!!!! Terra !!!!! STOP !!! Terra- I can't !!!!!!!! The boulder misses the car but not by much. Just enough to send the car into a flipping out of control freenzy ! Finally the flipping stopped ! The was sitting on it's cieling. The rain leaked into the car. Terra groaned & looked over at her mother. Who had a really bad cut on her forehead.
Terra- Mom ? Didan- Terra.......go.......... Terra- What ? Diana- Go !............runaway from here !
Diana was soon gone. Terra kicked the car's door hard with her bottom feet.
Terra- Okay Mom.
Terra felt a strange feeling go over her. She began to cry as she stood in the rain looking at the totalled car. Then reality set in. She grabbed her mom 's purse & got every singal bit of money she could find.
(In The End- Linkin Park)
Terra realized what she had to do. So ran as fast as she could to get away before a policemen walked up to her.
chapter 3 coming soos everybody !!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 15, 2006 20:04:35 GMT 2
Whoa that is all what I could say, can't wait for chapter 3
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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 16, 2006 11:32:42 GMT 2
Chapter 3
Terra ran from the accident.
Will- She's blonde hair & blue eyes. And is 14 years old.
Will, dressed in his JAG uniform was addressing an officer about Terra's disappearence.
Officer- I'm sorry Mr.Promise. But we didn't have a girl like that in your description.
The officer was getting pretty annoyed. By this time Terra was on board a airplane heading to the mainland. She studied her brochure of Jump City. Then she had found a letter from her mom in the money she had taken.
Diana- Dear sweet angel, Take this cash and go wherever you wish. I will always love you. Be a brave girl & don't let no one stop you from achieving your goals. I know you'll make it on your own. Promise me one thing: You will try & talk to your father. He admitted that he still loves you.
Always, Mom.
(High- James Blunt)
Flight Attendant: Flying alone ? Terra- Um yeah. Flight Attendant: We'll I'm sure you'll have a great time. It's a 8 hour flight to the mainland. Terra- Thank you for telling me.
The Flight Attendant smiled & walked off. Terra still couldn't stop reading the note. She was still in shock .
Chapter : 4 coming soon everyone !!
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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 17, 2006 11:57:56 GMT 2
Chapter 4
Willam was on the phone trying to track down his daughter.
Will- I don't care ! Do whatever you have to do to find her ! (he shouts) Officer- Look Mr.Promise we're doing all we can. Apparently your daughter is no longer in Hawaii.
Will hangs up the phone. He was a proud man , strict & headstrong but deep down inside he did love Terra. He was going to find her no matter what it took. He couldn't bare lossing her also.
(Breaking Away-Kelly Clarkson)
The plane landed in Gotham City. The Gotham airport was real busy.
Terra- I can't believe it. I'm actually here.
She had more money for hotels.
(Sneak in scene)
Some where in Gotham City....
At Wayne Manor..........
Bruce- I understand if you feel you have to move on. Go your own way Richard. Richard- I'm sorry. But I feel I have to do this. Bruce- I know. You've been ready for a long time. I've seen it in your eyes. You will make a great hero for Jump City. Richard- I'm gonna miss you Bruce. Bruce- Not as much as I'm gonna miss you.
Richard hugged Bruce.
Richard got on his motorcycle and sped out of the drive way.
Bruce- Good luck.....Robin.
(end of sneak in scene)
Will- Venessa it's inparateth that I find her . Venessa-(on phone) Why ? So you can send her away. Will- No ! Venessa I learned my lesson ok. Please you've gotta help me. Vennessa- She always wanted to go to Jump City. Will- That's on the other side of Gotham City !! Venessa- You asked.
Venessa hangs up the phone.
Terra finally got a hotel room. She was ready for a bath. But then she noticed the telephone. She had to call someone. (Phone rings.....)
Venessa- I'll get it !
She answers the phone.
Venessa- Yeah. Hello. Terra- Nessa ? Venessa- OmG ! Terr ! Are you ok ?!!!!!! Terra- Yeah. I'm fine. I'm in Gotham City. Venessa- Your dad called. He's really worried about you.
Venessa told her what she said to Will.
Terra- You told him I was here. Venessa- Yes. I'm so sorry Terr. He seemed scared though. Terra- I bet. Venessa- No. Terr he was. He wants to find you. And make up for everything he's done. Terra- You're serious ? Well, if he wants me he'll have to come & find me. I'm not calling him just yet. Venessa- Will you let him find you ? Terra- Nessa I'm so scared. I guess in my heart I do.
They finally hung up. Terra just laid on the bed looking up at the cieling thinking........
chapter 5 coming soon !
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Post by Terra137Raven on Oct 17, 2006 23:47:55 GMT 2
*waits*
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Post by XDawn on Oct 17, 2006 23:54:05 GMT 2
It's good, very good!!! actually, good doesn't say it all. but my vocabulary is at a minimal right now. Amazing, that sounds a bit better, but still not the right word. I'll sit and wait like everyone else though.
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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 18, 2006 9:19:53 GMT 2
Thanx dude !!!
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Post by Chuckz on Oct 18, 2006 9:48:39 GMT 2
It's good, very good!!! actually, good doesn't say it all. but my vocabulary is at a minimal right now. Amazing, that sounds a bit better, but still not the right word. I'll sit and wait like everyone else though. To Help him in his search for better words about this thread I've made a little list on possible words. >good >great >Stupendous >Collosal >Magnificent >Spectacular >Fantastic >Excellent >Marvelous >Exaulting >Facinating The list goes on ^_^
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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 18, 2006 9:52:40 GMT 2
Hey ! Thanx dude !!
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what... havent you guys ever seen a super-hero before?
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Post by shiftxjgt77 on Oct 20, 2006 9:26:50 GMT 2
wow i love, wish i had this creativity
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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 20, 2006 9:28:11 GMT 2
Cool ! Thanx dude ! (chapter 5 coming soon !!)
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