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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 20, 2006 9:56:03 GMT 2
Chapter 5:
Willam boarded a plane. He was headed for Gotham City. A man that looked suspcious was in the next seat behind Mr. Promise. Terra was walking down a street when a bunch of police cars went streaming in the same direction. She decided to go investigate. When she got to the crime scene she saw the Batmobile by a couple of cop cars.
C.Gordon: Thanks for brinning him down Batman. You truly are a hero. Batman- It'll get some use to after Robin's left.
Batman then saw Terra. Her eyes glowed for just a second. Because she was excitted he actually looked at her.
Batman- Excuse me. C.Gordon: Certaintly.
Batman walked up to Terra.
Batman- Hi. Terra- Hi. You're.....Batman ? Batman- Yeah. Your eyes I saw them glow. Does that always happen ? Terra- I havve a special gift. I was hoping to see Robin. Batman- Oh. Well he dcidded to go his own way. You must have a special power & a loving heart. Remember...any one can be a hero. Terra- I will.
She looked a away for a few minutes...looked back & he was gone.
Willam's airplane arrived in Gotham City. He rushed through the airport , took a cab straight to the police station.
Will- (Standing at the front desk of GCPD.) She's 14 years old. Here's a recent picture. C.Gordon: Why would she run away Mr.Promise ? Will- Because of me. C.Gordon: Why would she run away from her own father ? Will- Because of what I have had planned for her. I was going to send her to a boarding school in France. C.Gordon: Ok. Allright. We'll get to work on it right away. If she's here...we'll find her. Will- Thankyou.
Willam left the station possiblity going to find a hotel. THe strange man that sat behind him on the plane followed him.
Terra- ( On phone with Venessa) Nessa I know what I wanna do. Venessa- What? Terra- Help people. Venessa- Terr you can't even control your own powers. How are you going to help people ? Terra- I'll learn. Some one very special showed me that. Venessa- OMG ! You actually saw him ?!!!! I'm so jealous of you !! I wish I was there ! Terra- So do I. Venessa- I'm ver proud of you Terr. You sound different. You sound happy. Terra- I am.
chapter 6 coming soon !!!!!!!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 20, 2006 11:17:58 GMT 2
Wow this story is awesome so far.
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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 20, 2006 11:22:42 GMT 2
Thanx ! took a long time to get that chapter up !! I've been real busy lately.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 20, 2006 11:24:26 GMT 2
Your Welcome, I could tell you have been working on it for a long time.
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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 20, 2006 11:26:54 GMT 2
I hate to say it but in my oppinon this is so far my best work yet ! And you've read alot of my work !!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 20, 2006 11:28:11 GMT 2
Yeah I have.
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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 21, 2006 9:56:23 GMT 2
Chapter 6 (Incomplete- BSB)
Willam sat on the bed in his hotel room looking at family photo.
Will- I miss you both. I'm so sorry. I will find you Terra. We're going to be a family no matter the cost.
Telephone rings. Will snatched it up.
Will- Yeah hello ? C.Gordon- Um Mr.Promise we've found your daughter. Will- Where ? Where is she ? C.Gordon- Maybe you'd better say hi.
Gordon handed Terra the phone.
C.Gordon- It's ok sweet heart.
Terra took the phone.
Terra- Daddy ? Will- OMG ! Honey. Terra are you ok ? Terra- Yeah. I'm ok. Daddy I wanna come home. Will- Ok. We will do just that. Terra- Dad. I really wanna see you. Will- Ok honey. So do I. I'm on my way baby. Terra- Ok. I'll be waitting.
Will rushed out the hotel room & headed for the police station. He rushed up to the police station's front desk.
Will- Terra Promise. C.Gordon- Mr.Promise I believe you are looking for this young lady. Terra- Daddy !
She rushed into his arms.
Will- Oh my baby girl !
They hugged. C.Gordon smiled
C.Gordon- She came in the station on her own. Terra- Daddy I saw him . I actually saw him. Will- You saw your hero ? Terra- Daddy I wanna learn how to control my powers. I really do. Will- Ok honey. We will deffinetly learn . C.Gordon- That's a very special daughter you've got Mr.Promise. Will- I know that now. So where do you wanna live?
They left the police station.
Terra- I can choose ? Will- Of course. Terra- What about your job ? Will- Military guys...they'll get over it.
Terra smiled at her father for the first time in years. She grabbed his hand for the first time.
Terra- What about we live here ? Will- Here it is.
4 weeks later.........
(Avril Lavigene- My World)
Terra was on the phone with Venessa as she unpacked her stuff & put it in her new room in a condo.
Venessa- (on phone) So you're living in Gotham City now ? Wicked. Terra- Isn't it amazing ? Venessa- Hey don't forget to visit Jump City for me. Terra- You've got it. It's so awesome Nessa. I do feel like our life is beautiful now. Venessa- I told you your Dad was missing you. Terra- Yeah. Look it's getting pretty late over . So I'd better let ya go for now. Venessa- Ok girlfriend. Let me in on the first guy you go out with. Terra- I will. Night. Venessa- Night.
They both hung up the phone. Then the phone rang again.
Terra- (on phone) Nessa I said tomorrow ok. Man- Hello Terra. Terra- Who is this ? Man- Someone who wants you & your father's blood.
Terra gasped loudly !
Terra- Daddy ! Will- What ?
She pointed at the phone. Will picked it up.
Will- Hello ? Man- Oh hello Will. Remember me ? Thought I was dead when you left me in that jungle didn't you ? You have a special daughter. I'd hate for anything to happen to her. Will- You sick...
Dial tone.
Will- Honey you ok ?
Terra nodded. Will just hugged her.
Chapter 7 coming soon !!!!!!
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Post by Chuckz on Oct 21, 2006 13:39:22 GMT 2
Spoiler: hate to burst your bubble but if that mystery man is Slade then you have it wrong. You see Slade's a really rich guy who lives in Jump City with 3 Kids. His name is Slade Wilson. Hope this helps ^_^
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Post by Terra Zemex on Oct 21, 2006 22:23:23 GMT 2
It's not Slade .
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Post by Terra Zemex on Nov 2, 2006 8:24:21 GMT 2
Chapter: 7
Walking home together one evening from a movie.... Terra hugs her father as they walk down the loneky street.
Man- Hello William.
A man steps out in front of them.
Man- Remember me ? Thought you killed me ? Will- Chase ? OMG! Terra run 1
Terra ran away as fast as she could. But not far from them.
Chase- How long as it been ? Get in there !
He pushed Will into a dark alley having a gun in Will's back. Terra stopped running. No one was going to take her father away from her now. Chase began to beat up Will. Terra looked down from a roof.
Terra- Hey !! How bout picking on someone who can fight back !! Chase- Stay out of this little girl ! Terra- I'm not a little girl !! Chase- You're a pest !! I believe Will would love to see you suffer. Terra- Wanna bet ?!
Her eyes glowed yellow ! Chase had a *what the----(beep)* look on his face. Terra lifted a rock !
Will- Terra !
Will wanted her to stop.
But she dropped it ontop of Chase , who let go of. Will fell a few feet away from the crashing boulder ! * A gun shot* was heard ! Terra flew down to her Dad. She saw the worst. Her Dad had been shot !!
Will- (weak) Terra. Terra- Daddy. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I never ment for this to happen. Will- (weak) Go Terra. Run away. Terra- What ? Will- (weaker) Pl...ease...I'll....always ...
But he didn't get to finish. He was already gone. Terra ran as fast as she could !! Rain poured . Gotham City wasn't so glamerous anymore. She ran to the nearest phone booth.
Chapter 8 coming soon *and it's the final chapter*
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Post by Terra Zemex on Mar 16, 2007 9:25:24 GMT 2
(Never Alone: Note: I don't know this artists name...)
She picked up the phone. But hesitated....She couldn't call the police or Venessa. She fell to her knees right there in the phone booth...Rain poured.
In an alley not far.....
Robber- Hey this isn't your town...aren't you suppose to be with....? Robin- Just moved here and for now on...I work alone! -------------------------------------------------------------------------
A bus passes that same alley way....Terra stares out the window as she looks at a brochure.... JUMP CITY.....was her next stop..She's always wanted to see this city...Maybe with no one knowing her she could hide her powers. Or maybe she could try and help people. It was a big choice for her....Of course we all know the choice she made.....
AFTERSHOCK2: My name is Terra.....and I have done horrible things.....I've sworn to serve a dark master....and I have absoultely no regrets.....
THE END^^
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Post by flara on Mar 16, 2007 13:52:32 GMT 2
oh wow!!!! that rocked! ^^
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Post by Terra Zemex on Mar 16, 2007 16:26:01 GMT 2
Thanks Flara^^ I finally finished it^^
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Um, hello. Its...Nice to meet you.
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Post by lemon on Mar 16, 2007 16:46:23 GMT 2
it seems so sad, but i do like it.
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Post by Terra Zemex on Mar 16, 2007 19:40:39 GMT 2
Awww it was suppose to be kinda sad..her life was a tragedy^^ But I'm glad you liked it Lemon^^
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